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Polls & Contests
Started by WebbedMaster at 06-05-2006 10:50 AM. Topic has 12 replies.
  
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 06-05-2006, 9:13 PM
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Super_Monkey
 
Joined on 03-27-2006
Adelaide, Australia
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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Ooooh yay, a new contest! Thinking caps on people!
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07-07-2006, 9:32 PM
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Super_Monkey
Joined on 03-27-2006
Adelaide, Australia
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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02-03-2007, 7:11 AM
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Chell--
Joined on 02-03-2007
england
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack--Happily ever after.
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Once upon a time..
There lived the most beautiful sea monkey in the whole tank even the WORLD! her name was lilly! she was so stunning that even the green algea fancied her!.Well one day she was out with a few freinds and decided it was time she settled down with a nice handsome sea monkey and had sea-babies.so her and her freinds went to funkos cafe,where sat on the oposite table was a strapping young sea-monkey named Beeb.They looked at eachother and they knew it was love at first sight ,shortly after he asked her out,so they went to the park and had a pinic bye the waterful they seemed to realy love eachother.so as there little lives bloomed he proposed.He got down on his tail and asked her to marry him "lilly?,you have made me so happy in the past week! i know i can not live with out you,and the thought of losing you makes my blood run cold so what im trying to say is,Lilly will you marry me?",she was so shocked she could barley move her mouth to drop her jaw!.So in his mind she already said no,as he turned around to walk away dropping her hand he helled his head down and took a step away,then all of a sudden "YES" lilly shouted his head flew up and he span around,they hugged and a slow tear fell from each of there eyes.In time as there wedding grew closer there love seemed to 'die' they no longer had feelings for one another.In time came there wedding day.Beeb in his black coat and top hat waited for her at the altar when the sound the weding music played in came lilly dressed in a long white dress,crown and holding a beautiful bunch of algea.When lilly got there tears streemed down her face but not in tears of joy,tears of sadness as she knew this was the wrong thing to do as Beeb said i do,lilly looked at him,and turnt around and ran off tears streeming down her face running to a place where she knew she would feel happy,Funkos cafe.As she ran thorugh the doors ,she ran up to Funko and hugged him tightly and kissed him..he was the one she loved..all along.They became a couple and fell madly in love.Walking into funkos cafe one day he pulled her aside got down on his tail and asked her to marry him " lilly i love you dearly and i always have i canot live without you..we belong together will you marry me?".With out taking a breath lilly said yes.They got married a few weeks later and at the cermony lilly had tears of joy as they became man and monkey.A through years later they had a sea-monkey son called fenki and sea-monkey daughter called lucy.They lived happily ever after..The end.
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02-21-2007, 12:33 PM
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Sea_Monkeys_Rock
Joined on 02-18-2007
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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Once upon a time…
There was a young boy named Rick. He was eagerly waiting for the arrival of his very first set of Sea Monkeys. Rick had been doing his chores and receiving allowances, and with a little help from the Tooth Fairy he finally had enough. Yes it was his favorite tank. For the past 5 weeks he had his eyes on it. The Sea Monkeys on Mars kit. It had everything he wanted, an amazing tank, the water purifier, the eggs, the growth food, feeding spoon, aqua leash, and Plasma 3, To make sure he would have the most and healthiest baby sea monkeys around. And also at the very last moment he lost his front tooth, and with that money and the money he had left over he even bought the wrist aquarium along with it.
DING DONG
ITS HERE!!! Rick shouted. He answered the door and wasted no time he ripped open the box filled the tank with bottled water and added the water purifier and waited eagerly for 24 hours only taking his eye off of it for homework, food, and sleep. Finally, morning, time to add the Sea Monkey eggs. He quickly jumped out of his tall bunk-bed and ran for the eggs, he eagerly asked his mom to cut open the eggs and then poured them into the water and gently stirred with his feeding spoon. He watched for about 30 minutes and didn’t see anything. He ate breakfast, after breakfast he watched for another 20 minutes, nothing. Then he had to go to school and 6 hours later he came home, he looked again, nothing. After dinner that night he looked again and still didn’t see anything. He added the plasma thinking it might help the eggs hatch. He looked at the temperature of the house it was 75f, a perfect temperature for hatching. He was so sad and so confused at the same time. It took a near 4 days until something caught his eye in that tank. He looked and there, as plain as day, was the tiniest of all sea monkey kind swimming there all alone around a volcano in his Mars tank. There was only one that hatched, and more never did come. He named that Sea Monkey Late. He used to joke around how he was so happy to have his "late" sea monkey, rather then never.
Late the sea monkey lived to be 4 ½ years old. A very long time for a sea monkey. The little boy who is now in high school knew it all his life, that his little "Late" sea monkey for a sure gift of life and that the sea monkey would never be forgotten in his entire life. That sea monkey brought Rick through some of the happiest times in his life, and he would never… be… forgotten.
The End
Not a true story but, bits and pieces are inspiration from real life events.
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04-15-2007, 5:27 PM
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cowgirl5456
Joined on 04-16-2007
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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I'll give it a try....
RRRIIIPPP!! The top came off the packet that read: STEP 2, SEA-MONKEY EGGS. It was time for Eliott to dump is sea-monkey eggs into the ocean zoo. He had waited a whole 24 hours (Very long for impatient Eliott) and now it was time to put them in.
In Eliott's mind, they would grow instantly and live forever. But this is not so. He watched, his eyes never leaving the magnifying bubbles for 30 seconds and when nothing appeared, he got mad and went to play video games. In the kitchen window, a miraculous thing was happening-they were hatching!! But they were so tiny that even Eliott's crude eyes could not see them. After a few days, they were growing and the shrimp civilazation was prospering. Eliott was beginning to think that he had wasted his money on dead sea-monkeys. But he didn't have even the slightest idea that they needed time.
Inside the tank, there was a normal family of sea-monkeys, called the Poolies. The youngest was Spencer. He was very scrawny and was always getting chased by the bigger sea-monkeys. Even though he may not have been the strongest or most athletic, he was the smartest. That's why he never got caught by the ones who were trying to catch him. Spencer could outwit anybody in any situation. He did have a few friends.... there was Keeley, a small cute girl monkey, and Gordy, a chubby frecklie shrimp. They were all misfits, but together they made pretty good buddies.
Eliott had waited a week, and was at his breaking point when they could not be seen. So he was planning to...... I can't even say it........ dump them down the drain!!! So when he got home from school, he placed his backpack on the kitchen chair and went ove to stare at the doomed monkies. He looked at them, seeing nothing.
To the sea-monkeys, he was this gigantic monster trying to pick up their tank!!!Mayhem struck their city. As enormous hand grasped the sides of the tank, there was havoc and shrimp were swimming around frantically trying to find an escape! "What's he going to do?!!" shouted someone. "We're going to die!!" came a scream. Spencer was in the middle of a sea-monkey game kind of like chess with Keeley and Gordy. They looked up at the top of the water hopelessly. When the water thinned and the ocean zoo was turned on it's side, Spencer had an idea. "Grab onto the algae stuck to the walls!!!" comanded Spencer to his friends and family. (Eliott overfed them and there was algae caked onto the sides) They all clutched the green goop with their tiny sea-monkey fins in a last attemt not to be sucked to the top(now the bottom) of the tank. As the water became less and less, it seemed there was no hope for them. But then, amazingly, it stopped and the tank turned upright again.
"ELIOTT MICHAEL DARRING!!!!!!!' accused his mom with firm lips and a pointed finger. "Were you just trying to dump your sea-monkeys in the sink?!" Eliott rushed to his room and his mom put some more water in the zoo and placed it in the window hoping there were still some surviving monkies. Then she stamped off to critisize Eliott.
As the tank was turned upright, the Poolies, Spencer, Keeley, Gordy and about three other frazzled shrimp floated to the bottom. The water was cloudy with the stirred up debris. That's when Eliott's mom added more water and everyone was thrilled it was all over. But they had lost about 30 good monkies that day that will never be forgotten. lol It was at that moment that they realized Spencer had saved them all. The city recolonized and peace returned when Eliott's mother made him give them to his friend who loved them forever and took great care of them.
And even after Spencer was long gone, his legend lives on.
THE END
lol It was kind of corny and not all physically correct, but I think it'll make pople think twice about dumping their sea-monkies.
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04-15-2007, 5:39 PM
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Sea monkey lover
Joined on 04-10-2007
City of the stars
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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Wow! That was a really cute story. Very imaginitive.
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04-15-2007, 5:56 PM
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cowgirl5456
Joined on 04-16-2007
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Thanx
DARN!!!!! THIS WAS LAST YEAR, WASN'T IT??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAARRRRGGGG!!!!!
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04-16-2007, 8:54 AM
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Sea monkey lover
Joined on 04-10-2007
City of the stars
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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It seems that way... Although I do not see who won...
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04-16-2007, 12:51 PM
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cowgirl5456
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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They prolly never judged it since only 2 people entered.
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04-16-2007, 12:54 PM
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Sea monkey lover
Joined on 04-10-2007
City of the stars
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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04-16-2007, 1:34 PM
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cowgirl5456
Joined on 04-16-2007
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Re: SHORT STORY CONTEST: Win a free Sea Monkeys Family Action Figure Pack
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o well. *sigh* Do you know what Webbedmaster's email is? I want to ask.
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